Tuesday, February 23, 2010

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Fics Ranking 5 ~ February.

The fics of this month, but if I have time , just do a second entry.


Title: From the frying pan
Author: Larag
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: T
Pairing: Sirius Black / Hemrione Granger.
Status: Completed.
NDP: 142,671
RR:
Hi, Lara.

What? What and thought I had forgotten you and should you RR? No, I needed time to read my fic integer and let a comment on the size of Houston. Like do I have to split in two in fact, but it's worth.

addition, it was lengthened because it gives me a lot penilla is complete everything, so I probably read a lot of back to pot along this RR. But as I know, I know I do not have to take into account.

rennet before jumping to fiction, one thing I can not avoid commenting in your response to my RR (hell, you spent almost an answer RR.'m gross mu): if I were to Sirius waiting in the box so that you will be charged first underpants understand that I was wrong department and second drag him to the nearest store before I cast my eye eneamicompañeras ... You do not know what kind of fresh work yo!

Ays that handsome. Do you know that when you leave George Clonney announcing Nesspreso I remember you?

The sweet and naive, you can stay there, but I was young ... I've matured a lot since then, so much that sometimes I scare myself. Who I'd tell my writing expiring a fic with the Slytherin girls as proto? Or that I'd like Percy Weasley?

Yes, I like Percy Weasley. Do you remember the weed that gave us both? For now I like it. In fact, I think the Percy / Audrey is, next to Teddy / Victorie, the best couple cannon that has left the Jotaká epilogues.

And yes, I know what I mean.

Do you see why I miss it so much?

And, ending with your response to my RR, as Umbridge does not seem a plausible excuse. That is, Hagrid has a sex-appeal (or as they write) about twenty past eleven point still does not go through life making such crap.

Anyway, try and focus because I had forgotten how hard it is to write a RR of an entire story without being chaotic. Well, there's only one way: by dots. Will be 26, one per chapter, it seems only fair. I'm afraid I'm going to repeat many of the things I've been saying over the RRs I've been leaving, but so are all together and resumiditas.

1. I told you earlier in the RR, but I love your comparisons because each of them is a waste of imagination and irony. My favorite is still this: "simpletons smiling as if you had found the last horcrux in the dustbin of Malfoy."

2. Tonks & Remus. This is one of those couples who I like and it's your fault. From the first moment in which he mourns his death with Hermione (I never said it, but when the first time I read it I was glad she was dead. I've been very bad the rivalry) to the epilogue in padrazos plan has been I believe their relationship. Really, I think that's how really must have been written ... The only complaint is I miss Teddy, but you can not have everything in life. And Charles is also a cucada.

3. Ron & Artie still do not like ... The truth, not that I want the kid to spend the rest of his days alone, even if, as Jotaká, his brother Charlie can do not see why he did not, but I feel their relationship as very rushed and stuck with a shoehorn. I do not know, I would have preferred to imagine that he would meet someone and now.

Although I admit that I liked to know that Molly was raging and that leaving it open to anyone would have made up his mind that he and Cordy had something. Which brings me directly to point 4.

4. Cordelia. I've always wondered if the name had something to do with one of the characters in the series of Buffy ... The fact is that I find it ironic that I finished with the healer Wilkes, above all, because I laughed a lot with his beginnings. That is, he thought her pretty wonderful as well because he cared by his partner and she suffered injury because if Herms died, but managed to get Sirius, would always stand in the shadow of the first wife.
In any case, my question is not which of them will go arregladito, but who take the line of the eye more accurately labeled.

5. Molly (rounded to 3, but not the hair) has emerged recently, but I think that has been in place. I imagine that with the low opinion of Sirius always seems to have a drink should not be very pleasant to owe the life of his daughter. Clear that for Ginny (and their children in general) no drink that is not willing to drink this woman, that we should acknowledge.
But the straw that breaks their glass should be that your child live in sin with Artie. Poor, if not in my vein Slytherin, give me grief.

6. Mad-Eye Moody. Alias, the man with more patience in the world. I find it surprising that after working so long with these people not been killed yet. I especially like his role in the attack on Prince May, thank goodness we do know when to intervene in a battle, because he showed back in the capital "7? I believe that couples do your thing.

7. Oh, now I'm reading, it's time to congratulate you on one thing I forgot to mention at the time: the fact that we speak of the consequences of the first war. Ie, under the books, one gets the impression that nothing more be Voldy forced his Kit-Kat, everyone gets to celebrate, they make four trials of the remaining Death Eaters free 3 (with many not have the courtesy) and not more magical consequences for society.
is, it seems that the only ones who are screwed are the marauding survivors leave the remaining life so happy. However, there had to be most affected, not only because of the curses, as the Dementors went cheerfully loose in England ... However, one gets the impression that only Harry's family was devastated. Even Molly is not too traumatized by his brothers, at least Not likely.

8. Ginny Weasley. I dislike, I dislike and none of those things a secret, it still does not let anyone tell you you've done bashing because it was not like that at all. The Ginny of this story is a logical evolution of the original Ginny, the redhead in search of his hero. It is quite depressing that anyone who has read HP (and many do not go stuck in fics) say that Harry could not finish with another but her simply for being a redhead.
Okay, this is not a relation but an Oedipus complex. And with that reasoning, just a red dye his hair any character and we will have the ideal partner Harry, nop?
Well Ginny back to the fic, I'm glad not only to stay composed and not Harry but, above, do not feel the urge to match it as Ron happily. Look, for a few seconds I was afraid that paired me with Kingsley ...

9. Kingsley, (because I brought it up), has left rather little and always doing the Formica of the group, which follows the rules and such. Well, although psychologist makes the Ginny ... That was a pretty surreal moment (and inappropriate). But ...

10. Or what is, is the piece of note that you deserve for writing this great fic.

11. Harry. Yes, I know that I've gotten a lot with the kid, I've suggested that someone could stick a fork (and even seemed excited about it and all) and I've also compared with flan ... But in between the time you've been slow to update and let RR I've matured (just talk about it) and I hooked on Smallville.

What one thing has to do with the other? For now I imagine you Harry and Tom Welling (I think his name is so) and not the good of Daniel Radcliffe. And then yes I find the dot to the kid. We, the level of Sirius and Remus never comes, but at least they move from the knees to the marauders.
Mina
to understand that Gray be afraid to let him.

12. Harry / Mina (the next point predictably) are a cucada. I thought that the epilogue and both would have formalized their relationship by sitting with the Prophet's home, but I'm glad to remain faithful to their style.

13. For the poor, or to start talking about them, and who better to lead the way to Snape? For one of the few times I will head out in Potions class.
Say What? You know that I feel a kind of weakness for all boys and bad girls Sly. Well, not exactly, after analyzing some have come to the conclusion that HP has a weakness for losers, so I molan the Marauders in the past and the Slytherins in the present (excess say this is a secret between us, which as one of them finds out I said that phrase kill me.)
I loved Snape's intervention, the truth is I do not know if before his appearance as host of Hermione do not know if I missed, but it is funny that the shadow of Dumbledore is so long that nobody (and nobody understands Remus, Sirius and Harry) is in question or his loyalty or his disappearance.
pains me to say this, but I think that was the end he deserved.

14. Lucius Malfoy. I'm afraid I'll repeat a bit (a lot) but he also deserved the final. Anyway, does my absolute respect: someone able to speak Walburga without Descojonado word deserves.

15. The pretty girl to the Princess of Slytherin: Pansy Parkinson. Rereading the fic and considering my newfound maturity, not help think about Malfoy Pansy disgraced those who would not take the slightest advantage. Also, Draco was not so good as before and she had to be pretty fed up with everything. The only logical conclusion that it was in this mess is: did he hooked up with Goyle?

16. Draco Malfoy, I told you that I think is very cruel what he did Hermione. More than anything, Snape, Bellatrix his father and he were more bastards and yet must be well happy with Voldemort planned the conquest of hell while the poor mine has become a vegetable.
As bad as you fall, you have to admit that his performance and the Moon are the best by far of the sixth movie, at least among children.

17. Narcissa Malfoy, the truth is that it comes too, but I felt bad about the rest of his family and not do it. (Also, I had to put some point, more.) Well, little to say about it except that it's funny that her beauty is what you value this woman. And all thought it was her son's soul!

18. Because it was time to talk to Hermione. Ignoring the fact that these moment of my life I do not feel too much affection for the golden trio, this I like Hermione.
I enjoy his paranoia about herself, her insecurity in intimate matters in contrast to its security over the battle (as I said Tonks, protection was not exactly what I needed), his habit of calling the other the other Hermione Hermione and even amuse me his paranoia when he did not know whether to stay with Harry or Sirius.
Yes, I would have made sense to die, indeed, would have been even ironic. But I'm glad you have been saved but I have very, very jealous because he has been with Sirius and are turning the world on a boat together.
Damn, the hate.

19. Sirius, ays, Sirius. How far is this RR in the patted me excited because he had thrown the bike in any way and it showed how much he loved Hermione. You know that was one of my favorite Capistrano?
What more can you say about this man apart from what is wonderful and perfect? What should we clone it so that every straight woman and every man has his own Sirius gay?

20. Note that the argument deserves fic. Why yes, it is true that the stories in which Hermione Time Turner ends with Sirius abound in this fandom, but this has nothing to do with them. The plot is completely original and most unusual find, quite logically. Congratulations!

21. Thank you very much for that epilogue: I think I would have shot Hermione and Sirius if they had met with Harry and Mina in King Cross escorting their children to the train to Hogwarts.

22. Although the evil in it is that I'm out Ted Lupin. Teddy and Victoria are the only good that came out of that horrible epilogue.


23. Did I mention that the date of creation of the Word file for this RR is four months ago?

24. Okay, neither this nor the previous point were very accomplished, but you can not expect not to put a point to fill out, which I'm running out of things to say. The worst thing is that sure as you leave the RR'll think of something that I forgot to write.

25. Oh, this is over. Have I thanked you for all the fun times you made me go through this fic? Then it's time to do so: THANK YOU.

26. Conclusion: oh, I love this story. I can not add to favorite again? FFN damn.

And that's it, I was sad to leave the RR because it means that it's over. No more real! Now, if you do not mind, I'll eat a chocolate for depression over me ...

A million kisses flavored baileys chocolate filling.
PDTA: you know I'm on a diet. PDTA
2: I miss him already. _______________________________________________________________________________________________



Title: Madness II: Reloaded. C 10 .
Author: Thaly_Black .
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: M
Claim: Marauders.
Status: In process (through 10)
NDP: 10,036

RR:


Dean & Sophie!

is, hello, Thaly dear to my heart.

Here I am at 12 pm beginning to write in Word the RR for the capital 10. But before that, I prefer to answer your responses to my RR. You know what you always do as many points as Capistrano? What you do not mind cheating and I eat the first three answering that answer, yes? I swear I still going to be a very long RR.

1. Luckily I have not got to take love to Beth because I found it impossible to happen. It overwhelms me a lot. What I read: no grudge, is overwhelmed pure and simple.
Well, that and she is very clumsy: look how poor Harry is going to be times in nursing and yet, the poor could not beat the record of visits to the site set up by Beth.
Did not bother me that pregnancy does not distinguish an attack of appendicitis? The mother who bore her, for favor. And, that it is an attack of appendicitis, which he has tied up with the fainting and everyone at the door of nursing thought that Stephen had made him eat chicken seven tons of expired and had been stuck in my throat.
Even that would have been more serious. We, who have operated in a nursing if the thing had been serious he would still be in the operating room of St. Mungo.
Oh and since has left the issue: seen the mental state of some of the staff members of the school I believe that syphilis if you get there. And the meatballs as virus heads affects the elves.

2. Do not think bad because Sophie spend as much time near the dungeon: is doing field work on the habits of snakes in their natural environment Hogwarts. Why do that? Because I have asked help with the cannon of my fic (quiet, I will not put advertising) to be distracted while ignoring her friends and she is bundled with Dean. Consider it a sort of Gossip Girl at Hogwarts.

3. Attack of the Esteban: are you sure you are caught by Sirius? Or rather: are you sure he is straight? Is that "It's more fun if you resist ... then it will be better than I thought it more ambiguous. Therefore I doubt if you put in your bed at Marauder or girlfriend Beth ...
Look, I would not mind: As is the way the blonde stops to become pregnant. Although it is equally fertile get it again.

4. "The Hufflepuff no Aurors wood" I'm sorry to have to refute that, because I have to refute. I would use a thousand arguments and a half for it ... But in the end, I just need four words: Nymphadora Tonks was a Hufflepuff.
M, but as I was writing I did not know if that confirms your theory or mine, so I have to reinforce it, but I always thought that Alice was a Hufflepuff.
For one thing, Neville (however brave he is) has always seemed a Huffledor: has the sensitivity and empathy own house badger combined with the courage and suicidality of Gryffindor.
And, frankly, I think Voldemort is put to see who their enemies had been in that house at Hogwarts: according to him, the world is divided between his Death Eaters (who still can not remove it cool to have fans) and suicidal idiots who oppose him. Already there, which would arise had escaped three times and study their bloodlines. Point.
As to whether the Hufflepuff have wood or not ... also assumes that no wood Gryffindor traitors and watch where we were met Peter. Or, to take one example only of your fic, that Ravenclaw is the spitting image of mental sanity and see what Jack was buzzed. Or fox was Destiny.
And I think the lecture is to argue I'm done for now.

5. Hey, if Daniel is in a class that Beth, should not also be on the Sophie? I have to admit that Lolita, I say, dumb Lya has no hair, look how fast this poor guy used to have occupied the competition. Although their intelligence is something that I had never doubted.

6. Sam and Dean hear screams but do not quite know where to ring. But the truth is that evil will not be misled. Indeed, the village of Brae to which they are: is the one I asked that day in the msn? Call me
sadistic but it has been my favorite scene of the chapter ... Well, I could have done without open channel bodies.
The truth, with all that that Remus is love pure and simple (and that of this story that I have not got much love, but quiet, actually happens to me also that of Jotaká) sometimes we forget that there are copies as Greyback. Winchester clear that they forget that not everyone is as good Fenrir.
Or what is, to paraphrase a character from NCIS: between one and the other, there are all of the packs of wolves.

7. This point is only to certify that I have exhausted all my wisdom, so from here can only expect comments the less delusional.

8. I still say James is very complicated and that life is giving him too much rope to Nan. Let's see, I am absolutely certain that the wizarding world exists something like the writers, after all, is something that Muggles use to replace the magic, right? Well, it's all about doing an interview with Nan and then expose it to the school board to see what they think of their educational plans.
Or plan B: Avada the song, it puts a dark Marquita and tested over until you can say without a degree of cynicism, the following sentence: Voldemort is a son of a bitch! He killed the poor, Nan. " And to see who denies ...
may Voldemort, but the man is too busy trying to gain global control to walk denying murder.

9. Maybe this question is somewhat stupid, but in the end I found out who won the match. Come, go, you can admit it: the entire roll of appendicitis in Beth's because your little heart could not decide on whom to give the victory. Let us know ...

10. I like Sly Jeyne tactics has been added to your repertoire of Gryffindor, a bit of cunning evil will come to the house of lions. Oh and since has left the theme: Regulus tell that we are in the bar below my house. "And that look of surprise? Know that is called Hell. Do not think she meant me other? There is very hot ...

And that's all PR.
Thank you for everything, Soleto mine.
A big kiss of vanilla ice cream.
PDTA: I that you do not ask me to marry again because I'm going to say yes. ___________________________________________________________________________________________



Title: How to win a three-step Slytherin.
Author: The Room of Requirement .
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: K
Pairing: Theodore Nott / Lavender Borwn ..
NDP: 1,286

RR:


"And that perfectly red combined was one of the compelling reasons why the Sorting Hat put Lavender Brown Gryffindor "

Not if I had suspected that Lavender had ended in Gryffindor for some reason so ... Well, that and because he is brave enough to go to ask Theodore Nott in the face if it is a Death Eater.

wrote "Brave? Meant, in fact, suicide and unconscious.

We'll be very frank: "Theo is being so open to him to dye his hair red because it's fun to talk with Lavender dyes that meet Snape, right?

Ops, sorry to start like the RR, but the fiction has thrilled me and made me so much grace that I could not have begun otherwise. Well, maybe I could have done felicitándoos for this great team effort.

I have to mention to also feel a weakness for odd couples, so when a fellow 1001fics posted this fic out there and looked at who the players had no choice but to add to my favorites. Find time to read it carefully and let the comment that you deserve has been more complicated.

But I got it and I'm glad I read.

I enjoyed that perfect fusion between the superficial thinking and amargadillo Lav (but sexy) Theo. My favorite sentence (Other than I started with the RR) are:

Of which:

"can not believe a guy, that is, a boy, is ignoring that. Parvati would tell to see what an idiot I must be the mortifaguillo that, but would ruin his reputation fabulously fabulous girl. "

Oh, please, it's not a Death Eater (where did bring forth the ideas of Gryffindor? Y then the evil-minded are the Slytherin) apart from that it's fabulously fabulous is great.

of him: "O ten thousand five hundred ninety-two if it was Dumbledore Potter and outside which the grant." That is true. Very sad but very true.

Once again, many congratulations on the story.

Greetings. ____________________________________________________________________________________________




Title: A moment of men .
Author: anddie.cullen ' bp.
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: T Pairing
: Marauders / Lily.
NDP: 1,072

RR:


can not leave it! Now I always stay with the question of how Lily ended up coming out of that room. What James tried to make the word of mouth and she had to knock him out with a spell before running? Why then did not speak for a week?

Well, okay, a bit of concentration.

I liked the story: I like to have realistic surrealistic situations. Have I explained well? Not much.

Anyway, I find it unrealistic because it is clear that men speak well when alone. Or when you think they might be ... Well sometimes, even when they are alone * rolleyes *

surreal note is that the boys in question are the Marauders and Lily which is listening.

Good idea, good plot, I like the point you've caught the characters, if any is Remus released too, but it sure was close to full moon and the kid out of control us more and James ... Well, maybe not too violent when Sirius has learned that Lily swath looking parts that should not even know.

And a little more to say except "Congratulations, I am delighted."

Regards, beautiful. ____________________________________________________________________________________________




Title: Crucio .
Author: Sango Hale.
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Rating: T Pairing
: Marauders.
Warnings: Parody.
Status: In progress (to 19)
NDP: 60,836

RR:


Oh, gosh, have you any idea of time was that I laughed so much in front of my computer screen? Well, technically, since a couple of minutes I finished the chapter on "How I Met Your Mother" ...

reformulate the sentence, have you any idea how long he had not laughed so much reading a fic to the point that has already marched here half my family to find out what was wrong? Years.

And that at first was very reluctant to read it, because ... I do not know, the summary did not inspire me too. Plan was "the stars in the Hat Coach? Ops, that juju. "

But as you guessed, finally, I decided to ignore my instinct and I decided to read this great travesty that is your fic.

is what you have for everyone!

However, my favorite, out of habit and because it is the more you make me laugh is Sirius. Please do not let that take away psychiatrist arsonists or suicidal tendencies at all: they are the best of character. My favorite scene is when Snape used the voodoo doll to set fire to James and he jumps, "damn, how did you do that? I love you. " (You can not say that, exactly, but you get the idea).

And when given by Ghost Rider? That descojone. Sirius is global. Is authentic. Es .. legendary.

That yes, that is the biggest recipient, with permission from Salazar in Gryffindor, but it is to mess with Peter's boring now, and the rat is not as strong.

Another with whom I've laughed a lot has been with Lucius Malfoy. How many times you can repeat a course before deciding to take extreme measures? I was very angry that no one believed that he had graduated from their own (and those of Ravenclaw) but using black magic and dumbly exploited to give the victory to Dumbledore.

Although I do not know because I wonder: always do the same.

And James? The truth is that I laughed with him but not my favorite character. He and Lily are ... I do not know, she looks super-Piji in search of popularity and he has the head more square than a Rubik's cube.

Moreover, the attitude of both with regard to Snape it gets on my nerves. Will seem weird, but I almost dropped me worse than Mangoneo Lily as his lapdog of James qua. After all, he himself returned the blow.

Although, I agree with Remus that I too want to live in the magical world of James. Indeed, I would like to know where exactly to make it my happy place and take refuge in him when everything in my life goes wrong.

By the way, I love the image you've given vague durra charming costumes are not only studied half and agenda. And succeeds! Of course, the day I fail, fall around Hogwarts with him. Another

that's funny because it's a little duck is Mary McDonald. The poor do not have enough surnamed as satanic clown burger (I was amused when the Slytherin not messed with it because I already had enough with your last name), but also a friend charged with neurotic and addicted to popularity. Although it is not so bad, I have to guaperas Alan Alcott eating out of his hand. O

everything a Slytherin may be willing to eat from your hand.

who has it is the poor Salazar fatal O'Shea. No wonder they want to see them all dead and wants revenge ... The strange thing is that they conform to set fire to the Whomping Willow. Do I let

a character?

"Peter and Florence? Well, is that compared with the rest, is quite normalitos.
Does Revelation perfect trio, namely Gary Stu, Mary Sue and Ms. Sert? Could not the good of Salazar crystallize his revenge on them? Although certain that they are so perfect that which is recomposed Terminator. Would have killed to see the face of Sert when he learned that Sirius went with Regulus to the dance.

Dumbledore? Oh, yes, dumbly. I think I've talked a little about him, but I have to add that I loved to see him dressed as Gandalf. The truth, in the sixth film, I had my doubts about what movie I saw. My options were: a) HP 6; b) The Lord of the rings, c) Sweney Todd (not sure it is written well).

Ops, the Founders. I forgot the Founders! Although it is the custom in this fandom, right? Anyway, when I imagined running with the lions Godric the image that came to my mind was that of Kevin Costner with Socks in "Dances with Wolves." Are the techniques to link the house of Gryffindor did not evolve much in passing centuries, no?

gave me a little sad how divided the students: for Gryffindor, the bravest, for Rowena, the clever, the smug for Slytherin ... Helga and which are worthless. Damn, poor Hufflepuff.

Of course, the best Slytherin. In short, he can maintain an intelligent conversation, says towen, say, Rowena. Although he was coladita was Helga. Was subject to final or not?

And that brings me to my next point: I love parodies of scenes from the movies. Beginning to make the selection in reverse alphabetical order of the Gryffindor vs Slytherin Quidditch by the Bellatrix screaming like crazy because he killed a cockroach ... Seriously, you made me laugh like crazy.

Ah, to almost finish, I have always believed that Rosier always mentioned as one of the first followers of Voldemort was the father of Evan Rosier. The truth, the role that made Rastaban Lestrange was going in handy.

And, now, I leave you in peace: congratulations for this great joke of fic. As I said before, I laughed like crazy with it. Not only the first time, if not both times I've been rereading following the fic to let the RR.

Lots of happiness! _______________________________________________________________________________________





Title: Lost & Lonely .
Author: [info] thaly_black in [info] imaginlusst
Fandom: Twilight.
Rating: M
Claim: Jasper.
NDP: 1,277
RR

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Words: 217,178

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