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Title: Missed opportunities

Author: Kandra

Fandom: Harry Potter
. Claim: Voldemort + Harry.
Warnings: Dark ! Fic. Words: In 30 chapters, incomplete fic: 153,198. I read this story at least three times, so I had to leave you comment on this chapter because the last I can not for the prohibition of the page. Whatever.
No matter how much you read, I still do, although the narrative is simple and sometimes felt it could have been more structured with paragraphs, the atmosphere, the feeling that is involved is so large that it compensates. You really get into the story and feel as do the characters. As does Harry. As does Tom and other views that sometimes are normally displayed. Of course, feel that improves with each chapter, the words became more fine, more real and sharp. Much stronger and darker. You love and you do not truly desire to join the aims of Harry, his emotional division. That last is something I love, how to display a dark Harry, but not bad, but someone who pursue their own interests and goals, which is forced to choose even with the pain of his soul to the loyalty that you always loved. Although it is destroyed in the attempt.
remember when this fic was stalled, wanted to save Harry. But now I do not think that should die. To Tom. For him, it would be the perfect sacrifice for all I wanted to accomplish, all I wanted but at the cost greater than their soul could bear. If so, it would be fair, would be perfect.
Anyway, I have no words to thank this fic is one of the first that I got into the fandom. Greetings and if you read this, I really hope that someday you can put an end to this gem.


previous words: 19584. Total

new: 172,782.