[01.] 02/19/1911
Hi!
Well, my first time ^ ^ I hope I did it wrong, and if I do what I can say. Here I go ...
Title: After the death
Author: McGo
Fandom: Harry Potter .
Summary: Harry Potter dies 115 years surrounded by his family, but wakes up with 21 in a somewhat different world and people who believed killed in the parallel worlds are not always the same. ..
Rating: M.
Warnings: Violence , UA.
Chapters: 8.
Status: In process .
Words: 77,128, excluding of course the author's notes and responses to the reviews (wow, they were more than 20,000 words by the way). Contador
used: http://www.enfermeriaencardiologia.com/congreso/contador.htm I have no idea if it's necessary, but better safe than sorry.
Personal opinion: Hello!
Wow ... The story is delighted me. It's so ... Great. I love this whole load of action-adventure with hints of drama, but reached a point I have to rest. Honestly, I really like the stories are not all-day affair here, romance out there "and have substance, but I do not like to be totally the opposite, all day plans war, murder and more. If you created a balance between the two, would be fantastic.
HarryGinny Lo ... See thou that I do not really like the couple, but I think Harry needs love XD Also, I would a shame not to see James, Albus and Lily in the new world ... Although the romantic charge may also come on the other hand coffcoffRemusTonkscoffcoff: D
Harry's speech on humans is so true ... All humans fear the unknown. Is inherent in human nature. And it is only natural that Hermione defends his, after all his family is muggle.
As you have taken so long to update, I'm sorry, but it's true, I'm back to read me your story from the beginning, why it took me to comment since you posted the chapter. And while I read, I had the feeling that you had an original idea for the fic and has transformed into another. Not that is bad, but the change has been noticed very sharp. The originality of the new idea is appreciated, but the shift that has taken a while for another the story was like when you take a good shot in the head and stay a couple of seconds stunned @. I do not know if I explained well. Also, I think you should exploit more the relationship Harry / Potter Family. It is now a super warrior, but his parents are, even if a virtual parents, and the fact that he felt confused at least be appreciated.
also your theories on Muggle-born fascinated me. Have explained the issue with a simple, yet sensible and coherent, I've wanted to say "Rowling, that should be canon!". Hahaha.
A lot of curious characters that have caused me were the brothers of Harry. Leaving more, by fa fa fa by ...
I know that the war Harry and Neville had to change much, but am one of those people who think that all have an inherent essence of our brand, and you can not change. That is why I would like to see in the background, Harry and Neville still have their "essence" intact.
They should continue to see the memories of Harry, right? Otherwise everything becomes chaos of not understanding ...
Well, in summary: The story I'm enjoying it a lot, is original and spectacular characters, but the balance war / normal life should be exploited a little more, as well as the relationships between characters.
Besos. My review found in chapter eight, the last date. Although my nick is FF.net Nortia to dry. And here I would like everyone to call me that, too, please.
Besos.
